The Marquis House’s Second Daughter Hides Her Identity
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Art_lapsa
Alternative titles
侯爵家の次女は姿を隠す
Kōshakuke no Jijo wa Sugata wo Kakusu
One morning, the second daughter of a marquis family—Celestina—vanishes without warning. The Second Prince who cares for her begins searching. But when arriving at the marquis’s estate, something strange has happened: everyone there seems to have forgotten the existence of the second daughter. It is as though she never existed. Amid this bizarre erasure, Celestina’s rare status as the holder of the “Windaria’s Snow-Moon-Flower”—a power that can affect the country’s fate—becomes clear. Why did she hide her identity? What secret mission lies in her heart?
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Currently at Chapter 3
This story desperately needs a first chapter where characters and their relationships to each other are actually established. Instead we get half-baked pieces of that thrown at us starting in chapter 2, but in such fragmentary ways that its still confusing. What they have explained of FL's family situation literally makes no sense so far. And that family situation might be the driving force of the story? Its unclear. I don't actually know what FL's motivations in running away are. Was she running away from abuse/neglect? The prince (so far the main PoV character) that constantly hits on her? Is she just following her dreams? Or does it have something to do with her chosen one status? Who knows! None of those things are fleshed out enough to actually have any grasp on them. It ends up feeling like the author wants to write a mystery but doesn't actually know how, so they just don't explain anything properly forcing the reader to try to figure out what the hell is going on. But instead of getting drawn into a mystery and wanting to know how it unravels, I just find myself confused without anything to actually hold my attention in the story. I can't even really say if there are parts of the plot and characters that I like or dislike, because its too undeveloped so far for me to even have an opinion on anything.
I cannot agree with this more. 😭 Honestly I saw your comment before I started reading, and now I wish I hadn't started because I have so many questions now, but i'm not intrigued enough by the plot to get properly invested in it.
Oh, a world were the goddess actually punishes any imbecile who fucks with her blessed. Although, she should stop them before they die.
But, I guess she probably doesn't keep track of them till their souls randomly appear and then she sees how they died.
And yet somehow the family that gave birth to the divinely chosen magic baby decided to ostracize her
this is interesting, but i don't feel exactly 'grabbed' by the plot just yet. i need more information for sure
>Finally because just hearing the second daughter's name would cause the eldest daughter to have convulsions...
Excuse me, but what the fuck? The eldest toddler daughter had seizures just from hearing her baby sister's name? The baby sister that was already being neglected? How the fuck does that happen? That's insane even before you move on to the parents apparently turning their baby into a nameless maid as a response.
Well this guy seems to be the love interest, so sorry prince but your out of luck. Seems like the only purpose of your character was to be a framing device for the opening mystery.